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Annotated Bibliography - Annotations
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Name Course Tutor Date Revision recommendations I would revise the paper by making the paragraphs a bit clearer by giving examples and more details. I would also clearly define the terms used in order to avoid ambiguity. More clarification of the themes in each article would also be in order…
The revision would also entail a revision of the APA format as some of the authors’ names which are listed in the in text citation have been left out in the reference page, hence reducing the level of clarity in the work. The names of authors should also be proofread so as to make sure that they are not misspelt. The date of publication should also be included after mentioning any author. In terms of grammar, I would use the semicolon appropriately to make sure that it only ties up sentences whose meanings are closely related.
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