It was a pleasure to meet you yesterday. The incredibly high GPA you achieved is certainly very impressive and had a lasting impression on me. Please let me take this opportunity to tell you more about myself. My name is Hanyong Zhang, but you can just call me Tina. I am Chinese and English is my second language. I am a third-year business student who is majoring in accounting.
My writing currently has both strengths and weaknesses. I believe my greatest strength in writing and I attribute that strength to my positive attitude. I fully prescribe to the notion that writing is a process. I repeatedly read over the same material multiple times so as to get the deeper meaning of whatever am reading. I find a deep sense of achievement in the process of writing my paper but occasionally face minor challenges. For instance, at some point I find myself using wordy sentences that contain redundant words to express my ideas. Furthermore, I find it hard to differentiate between past and present tense, punctuation or spelling mistakes, and these at times detract the message I am attempting to convey. This is because English is my second language, and I am learning to use it. I am making a continued effort to work out this problem.
I have little experience in business writing and the past, the only formal writing I have completed has been in the form of the emails that I have sent to teaching assistants and professors.Also, I have done some letters, reports and other business communication