Homework Writing Class Assignment
...Homework Writing Assignment Homework Assignment Weak: Women sports are growing in popularity. Revised: Theincreasing number of female participants in soccer, basketball, tennis, volleyball and softball, have proven that women sports are growing in popularity.
Weak: New York City has a larger population than Chicago.
Revised: New York City, with a population of 8,143, 197, is ranked highest in the United States and larger compared to Chicago’s population of 2,842,518.
Homework Assignment #2
I would tell him to use connective words such and phrases as ‘first, second or moreover,’ when starting sentences in support of the topic sentence. For...