It also seems like there might be parts of your paper missing, because sometimes it looks like you are starting in the middle of the sentences after one of the big spaces. Or, you need to make sure to start with a capital letter for all those new sentences, I am not sure if they are meant to be new sentences or are continuations. Make sure to clean this up as well.
Conclusion: Basic structure things, paragraphing and sentencing, as well as indenting. If you do that, and clear up the spaces, the paper will look and flow much better. I do not know a lot about the topic, but everything else seemed ok to me, and you have enough graphs and sources to back up any of your information. Hope the paper and everything else goes well.