Please request and authorise your tutor to just remove what needs to be removed, then SPECIFY which we need to ADD because I cannot exactly point out what your tutor means. I am already following the original content of the Instruction to use GIBBS cycle essay on the four domains of nursing
The primary intent of the legislation is public safety.
Using the Gibbs (Gibbs, 1988) Cycle as format of this essay, I shall first describe what happened, reflect on my feelings and emotions, reflect upon practice placements as well as discuss developments in the four (4) domains: professional or ethical practice, care delivery, care management, and personal or professional development relating to learning outcomes for NMC 2004, giving details about what was good and bad about the experience, analysis of what sense I can make to the situation, and conclude what else could I have done. The discussion will be focused on the particular aspects of my practice and will provide indications to the learning and achievements in the process as well as areas that need further development
In a step-by-step process, I will describe the events or activities that happened as they exactly went under description. Description of feelings will follow that shall give the personal view and emotion that I went through as a student undergoing the whole process or activities, prior to the evaluation of experience that shall give an in-depth presentation of how the events and activities commenced. After careful evaluation, I shall present an analysis of the whole activities or events giving rationale and reasons why these occurred or what can be expected.
After the Analysis, I ...