They both compare their beloved women to a summer day, assigning people the features of this hot season.
The meaning expressed in the ends of both poems looks similar too. However, having taken a closer look at them it can be noticed that there is big difference. Shakespeare’s words give us hope, empower and encourage to live by means of a metaphor.
As for the overall flow of the poems, it can be said that, in some sense, Moss’ work is a simplified and updated version of the original. The words Moss uses are more up-to-date and prosaic. As a result, Moss’ poem is absolutely realistic. Shakespeare represented his feelings reflected in florid and lofty terms: ”But thy eternal summer shall not fade”. The second author, however, uses very simple and clear words and phrases: “People break their necks or just drop dead!” Shakespeare uses a greater number of metaphors: ”Rough winds do shake the darling buds of May”. The great poet also draws words softly, passing from one stroke to another. In such a way the reader gets easily immersed into the world of romanticism. Moss, on contrasts, writes plainly: “Even in May, the weather can be gray”. Therefore, from some point of view, it can be said that Moss’ poem is a humorous parody on the original sonnet
As it was mentioned above, both authors write nearly about the same, but their language is different. Moss uses more modern vocabulary. Words and phrases like ‘Thou art’, ‘thee’ or ‘thy’ of Shakespeare belong to his time, while Moss’ vocabulary is more up-to-date and, therefore, easier to understand for a contemporary reader. Still, it is easy to find parallels in the two pieces. For example, Shakespeare’s “Thou art more lovely and more temperate.” Moss interprets as simple “Youre nicer. And better. ” This shows that Moss’ poem follows Shakespeare’s lines.
Since the poem by Moss is a