In my previous essay devoted to discrimination against women in the US the most time and effort consuming was the passage on pages 4 and 5 stating the reasons and solutions to the problem of discrimination and violence. While putting the ideas into words the first time, I was trying not to concentrate on coherence and perfection of the paper in general in order not to loose the line of thought. The problem of domestic violence is very complex, so it was difficult to distinguish and concentrate on a few reasons and at the same time stay neutral. I chose not to concentrate on one specific factor, but rather give a general overview of men’s and women’s role in domestic violence, as well as mention the roles of education, upbringing, and society in general. The major problem was not to exceed the limited number of words, as the subject is very broad.
After I put down all of the ideas, organized them properly and structured logically, I went on to thinking about some authoritative data or opinions to support my view. At this stage of writing I was concentrating on tone, proper choice of words, so I read the passage a few times out loud to myself.