The fact that the author mentions different problems also makes the essay more informative. Another strong point is the inclusion of the real life personalities, such as the story of Trayvon Martin and Deamonte Driver, who died because of the “bacteria from the abscessed tooth that spread to the brain” after he was not given a timely medical help. (Giroux) This makes readers feel sympathy and become more prone to supporting the author. In addition, the author makes references to other authors, such as Steve Herbert, Glen Ford, Patricia and Trecento Clough to show that he is not alone in his considerations and make the argument more plausible.
In general, I share the author’s point of view when he explains that the present-day society allows too much violence and, yet, it continues spreading the messages of fear among the population. In my opinion, it is clear that the economic gap between people exists and it is always difficult to break the circle of poverty having poor education and, therefore, poor opportunities to prosper. At the same time, in my opinion, the essay could be better grounded. Although the author gives the numbers of poor and imprisoned minorities and explains the conditions in which they live, he did not provide evidence that could show the causal connection between the facts, such as the rates of drop outs of the minorities and racial stereotyping for example. However, the points covered in the article are worth consideration and further research. ...Show more