For example, the requirement in the question was to make a report on two organizations that address the needs of the aging individuals. Cortez provides the websites to these organizations and there is little discussion about the organizations. She focused more on describing the websites to these organizations which is evidently shown in her second paragraph. Despite the few errors that she made, it is my view that she answered the third question correctly and provided Sweden as an example of a state with different programs for the aging.
Amanda Dement’s discussion definitely provides the reader with the answers to the three questions provided in class. Contrary to what Cortez provided, Dement does not provide websites, but she provides the names of the organizations. The two organizations that she mentions are SCOOP and Meals on Wheels. She provides several examples of the services provided at these two homes and the problems that affect them. At the start of her third and fourth paragraphs, she goes to extra lengths to provider her readers with the days and hours that are required for visitations. Dement’s only mistake was that she did not include how other societies care for their aged. Dement’s last paragraph does not have the similarities or differences that other societies have when it comes to caring for the aging